Contest: 13 Verbs

Jack Mackerel
"Two to One"

 

 

 

 

 Tim's sucking down whiskey sours at a ratio of 2 to 1 faster than me.  A reflection of the late afternoon sun catches my eye, making me squint.  Apparently it makes Tim thirsty.  It's that quiet time of day, when the lunch crowd is gone and the nightlife hasn't started.  In a few hours, this patio will be flooded with frat boys, hippies, and girls in halter tops.  If we're lucky, be hippie girls in halter tops will step through the door.  At least we can always hope.

 

  We have standing orders for drinks after work on Thursdays, usually at a place called Tino's just down the block from the office.  We usually bump into people one of us knows and spend an hour or two posturing and swapping meaningless stories.  This afternoon, Tim OPENED the door to my office and suggested something different.  

 

  "First warm day of the year, you know what happens in a college town, right?"

 

  "What are you talking about?"

 

  "You know how the girls shed their clothes like a... like a... come on, help me with the imagery here."

 

  "Like a molting snake?"  I knew that someday it would truly pay to enrich my word power.  

 

  "Yeah.  The girls shed their clothes like a molting snake.  You can practically follow the trail down to the bars."  A smile spread across his face with that thought, "There's a whole different vibe in the air, man.  A whole different vibe."   

 

  "You mean even you might be able to score, just because the thermometer went over 60?  I guess even a stopped clock is right twice a day."

 

  And for that, the first round was on me.  And Tim's second, because he said that since I was still on my first, then his second didn't really count as a second round.  "A one-point-five, if anything," he said.  Funny how he's a Bud man when he's buying; it's mixed drinks when it's on me.

 

Mistake #1  This choice of watering holes is convenient to the university crowd, because they are often on foot.  It is decidedly inconvenient to me, because it's across town and I won't need to walk home.  Letting Tim talk me into this place was the first mistake.  

 

  She appeared on the patio at five minutes after 7 o'clock.  Birkenstocks on her feet, her hair pulled up into a mint green bandana.  A denim skirt and halter top completed the get-up, and as soon as I saw her, I knew that if Tim saw her, it was all over.  I tried to figure out a way to avoid it, but even before I could smell her jasmine perfume, I knew it was too late.

 

  "Miss, can I get another whiskey sour?" Tim's empty glass waving in the air.

 

  "I don't work here."  [That would have shattered anyone else's ego.]

 

  "Oh. [3-count pause]  How about I get you a drink, then?  [Without waiting for her to answer] You keep my boy company, I'll be right back."  

 

  Nancy clipped her sunglasses to her purse and made small talk for about 10 minutes waiting for Tim to return with a pitcher of whiskey sour - a handful of cherries littered the bottom.  He explains that they didn't sell it by the pitcher, but "they do now!"  He settles into his chair and pours three. 

 

  "Here's to molting snakes, eh?"  We touch glasses and I wonder why I let him talk me into coming here.  He and Nancy seemed to hit it off quickly enough.  It turned out that they had gone to the same high school back east, although by the time Nancy started the 11th grade, Tim had left town and was in his second year of grad school.   They knew a lot of the same people, and the same hangouts.  Some things never change.  Hearing about the small town where they came from sort of shattered my image of Tim as a teenage rebel. The people change, but the places rarely keep up.  Just like in this college town where the kids are always the same age, going to the same places. 

 

Mistake #2 - By the time the juke box was pumping out the Allman Brothers, the stars were out.  The first warm night of spring is always a surprise to me, so I didn't mind sitting back and listening to murmur of voices.  While Tim and Nancy were, I signaled to Tim, "I'm going to see a man about a horse."  Letting Tim out of my sight for those 7 minutes was mistake #2.

 

  When I came back to the table, the jukebox was done with the Allman Brothers, and Tim?  No, of course no Tim.  Nancy?  Nope.  I filled my glass from the pitcher and made the best of the next half hour as the jukebox blared a not-too-current-but-still-overplayed blend of Hootie and the Blowfish & Blues Traveler. 

 

  Half an hour later, I decided it was time to call it a night.  Tim was no where in the bar, although he did leave an unpaid tab with my name on it.  "Not a problem," I always say, "I have lots of money."  Two blocks down the road, I found our empty parking space, just as I remembered that Tim drove. 

  Forty-five minutes later, I am $15 poorer, but at home.  When the phone rings, it's 12:58, and the caller ID tells me that it's Tim.  I'm old enough to know that mistake #3 would be answering that call.

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Jack Mackerel is a native of New Zealand, but can be found nearly anywhere there is cold saltwater.

 

 

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